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Amid the horror and the bloodshed, weeping,
I dared to look at my loathed foe.
He smirked and then he promised:
“If you bow down to me,
upon my word, it
ends. Bow to me,
and go home.”
I said
No.
Nonet inspired by PoeticalCondition's prompt, which was... Write a Nonet!
Let me know what you think.
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-11-10
~Hyalma takes the restrictive minimalism of the nonet and creates compelling art in Victory in defeat. ( Suggested by fernknits and Featured by neurotype )
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very very much! To be honest, it was a bit overwhelming.^^
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Overwhelming good, right Lu? :huggle: Because you've done a beautiful work with this piece, it's the kind of writing that reaches your readers' hearts through its eloquence and powerful feeling to it!!! :love:

With so little you said so much here :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh yes, overwhelming good, definitely! So good! :)
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TheOneAndOnly543 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Cool
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:iconhyalma:
Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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:icontheoneandonly543:
TheOneAndOnly543 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Your welcome! :)
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SilverInkblot Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats!
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:iconhyalma:
Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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MohawkRex Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Only poem I can remember liking.
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:iconhyalma:
Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really? That's very kind of you. :)
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shadows-play Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is incredibly awesome.
It feels like the turning point in a great story, where the powerful villain is
denied the seemingly smallest but most valuable thing a person has.
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Well done! This is very well written! Congrats on your DD! You deserve it :heart: 
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!^^
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Blueeyes0001 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
you're welcome!
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LordCastigator Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
There are indeed times which call upon you to make a decision, Give in & betray your morals, or stand strong & face the consequences. I admire the choice made here...
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a fan of facing the consequences myself. :)
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Michangs Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice! :D The simplicity only makes it more easily applicable to real life situations. Drama in brief! I love it! :clap:
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D (Big Grin)
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TheGasMaster4381 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I like how this is so simple, but so dramatic.  Very well deserved DD! NIce job :clap:
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm quite fond of drama. Thank you! :)
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TheGasMaster4381 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Your very welcome! :)
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PurpleChaos Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
agreed
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LostGryphin Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on the DD
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:iconhyalma:
Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Thanks for everything!
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Vedokun Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Utterly perfect, I say.
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is it? Thank you!^^
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Vedokun Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It is. And you're welcome. :)
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
fantastic. the form and the text
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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AnimiPluviam Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
this is a good reminder to always to stay strong no matter what
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I have trouble remembering that sometimes.
Thanks for the comment!^^
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GreenScissors Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
This is very good. Great job! :D
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! Blush
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GreenScissors Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
You're welcome. :)
I love your icon by the way. :D
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thanks. I've had it forever and I don't think I'll ever change it. :)
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mizzmint Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on receiving a Daily Deviation! Hug Love
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! It was a very pleasant surprise!
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mizzmint Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome! :glomp:
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FREAKY20001 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
Extreme OMG Love It
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad you do. :) Thank you!
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I hope you have a nice day too. :)
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    My pleasure :happybounce:
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treegarchie Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I shall learn it by heart.
How can something so short have such impact?
Amazing poetry!
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Hyalma Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You made me blush... Thank you for the kind words!
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treegarchie Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
They were completely heartfelt, I'm not a big poem fan but I enjoy it very much when short is powerful :)
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IhaveClass Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013
 The first time the word "No" takes a positive meaning for me
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